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Wednesday 16 March 2016

Maths Strategy

Maths Strategy
This is my maths strategy that I did and we had to learn about tidy numbers. I had learnt a lot about tidy numbers and had now it is easier to answer a math question. 

Describing The Scene


Describing The Scene
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It was a cold winter afternoon, we went on a hunt for monsters and we were all running in the long grass. We ran past an old farm and some people didn't care and just talked, while some people ran into the forest.

This is my narrative, We had to look at this picture up top and we had think of 8 ideas that we had to write a narrative about the picture.

   

Saturday 12 March 2016

Pumpkin Story

Pumpkin Story
On one really hot day Kane felt like some pumpkin soup, so his dad dug up the soil and his dad felt like some pumpkin soup as well. So they dug crops out of the way to plant the seeds so they dug and dug.

Until finally they dug a really big hole and so he put on the gloves, so they started to plant the seeds. Now they covered the seed with the soil and now they had to wait for the pumpkin seed to grow.

So some months later his pumpkin grew and the seeds looked like some yellow flowers now. But they still needed to wait for the flowers to look like pumpkins, they probably need 2 months for the pumpkins to grow.

Then the flowers started to grow into pumpkins, now finally the pumpkins as grown and now we can finally pick them. So they picked them and Kane’s dad started to cut the pumpkins in half and they could finally make some pumpkin soup.  

This is my pumpkin story and it was kind of like describe the scene but we had 5 photo's of a boy planting the scene and waiting for it to grow and make pumpkin soup.

Friday 11 March 2016

Kayak Trip

Kayak Trip
Mr Willand Mrs Will went out to a river to lake so they got their kayaks off the roof and we put them in the lake until finally we flipped over right under the bridge. So we finally flipped the boats back over.

we jumped in and we had to get the water out as well and so we started to kayak back to shore and we finally got back tipped the water out. We put the kayaks out into the water and we kayaked around for a little while.

We were kayaking back to shore than we hit a rock and started to float away and we kayaked back slow so we didn’t hit no more rocks. We finally got back and picked the kayaks and put them on the top of the roof.


This is my kayak trip of Mr Willand and Mrs Will did when they went on a trip to the lake they did a lot of things like there kayak flipped over and a lot of other stuff

Science Experiments



This is me Sylis and Thomas DLO and this are the experiments that we did. 

Wednesday 9 March 2016

How To Survive A Cow Attack


This is my DLO about cows attacking people and the DLO is about how to survive a cow attack.  





Tuesday 1 March 2016

Using DRAFT To Edit My Work

  1. It was midnight, as Will was climbing the rocky wall at the park. He was trying to reach the top so that he could gaze at the beautiful moon.


  1. It was midnight, as Will climbed the rocky wall at the park, trying to reach the top to gaze at the beautiful glowing moon.


Here is me and Sebastian work that we did the first sentence that we write original one and the 2nd one is our draft one (Delete, Rearrange, Add, Fix, Talk).