Narrative

At the movies

I was really excited to go to movie at hoyts cinema with my cousin. The name of the movie was Percy Jackson The Sea Monster. It didn’t take us much time to reach the cinema at Sylvia Park. Me and my cousin relaxed back on the seat with yummy ice cream and popcorn. Suddenly I could feel something…..To my amazement my seat started shaking.

I saw Gozan seating on the seat watching the movie and I was eating my ice cream it was yummy. When I was in the movies there was an earthquake and everyone was scared at the movies. Poor me….my popcorn fell on the floor and it was scattered all over. But then everything was normal and we watched the rest of the movie happily.

When we watched our movies in 3D, one of my cousins did a loud fart everyone was laughing  at my cousin and my cousin had lollies in his bag and he did not tell us that he had lollies in his bag.  My heart was still beating faster because the earthquake tremors scared me alot.

Me and my cousin had a good time despite the earthquake tremors. We had a nice and big lunch at Mcdonalds. Then I went home.

I really like my narrative because I have an interesting introduction and a good hook.