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Friday, 27 February 2015

Onomatopeia

Bang! went the tackle he fell on the ground and Gozan tackled him. They were playing rugby union and they were on different sides. He broke his leg and he was hopping on one leg and he was yelling in pain. Then the couch came to get him and the couch helped him of the  field.


when he gets of the field they put an icepack on his leg then a boy from his side switched with him. The other side was winning and when the boys leg was better he went back on the field. he was ok it looked he not care now.


when he got back on to the field he was not fast but he was good at tackling them and his friend from his side scored a try. both teams were coming a tie and there were 5 minutes left. when Gozan got the ball he was going for the try then the boy with the broken leg tackled him because he was fullback.


The boy with the broken leg got the ball and ran for the try and he got the try. when he got the try the game was over and both teams shacked hands and celebrated. Now they were the best team for under 13 and celebrated by 
going to rainbows end.

Today I made me a story about onomatopoeia my one was about bang. It was about team work and it was about rugby, it was about someone brokering there leg too. 



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